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2015年01月12日

英語(英文)レポート 書き方の例2(400字程度) 

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NBA Should Allow APL
There are many rules in the sports field. For example, athletes must take dope tests to find out an athlete who cheats to protect athletes’ health. Another example is that a player who plays with team mates needs to wear same uniforms. This rule makes us easily recognize which team a player belongs to. On October 11th in 2010 NBA made a new rule to ban “APL shoes”, which had small springs in these heels to increase vertical jump. According to NBA press, “the shoes create an undue competitive advantage due to technology that increases vertical leap by players.” Although sports field should be fair, I do not agree this rule because it is not good for fans, sports companies and players.
First, NBA fans want to see better performance, and this rule does not come through with it. For professional leagues like NBA, fans are most important because without fans players could not make a living. Fans want player to do tremendous performances like a slam dunk, but fans lose the chances that they see better performances from this rule.
Second, this rule decreases the chance for sports companies to use new technologies and materials. Until now, many sports companies have created many types of merchandise. For shoes, they have used many materials. For example, air is used by Nike and gel is used by Asics. These innovations contributed better performances for athletes, and companies compete to create better goods, however this rule stops this competition.
Third, flying higher is a normal desire of every single NBA player. It could make sense that NBA banned APL if it were bad for athletes’ health, like doping, but APL is not bad for health, and it is totally safe to be used by athletes. APL can make athletes’ desire come true without taking risk. Therefore this rule is bad for athletes.
In conclusion, NBA should allow player to wear “APL”. If NBA does so, the fans are more excited to see quicker and higher basketball. Furthermore, this rule reduces the chance to compete for sports companies to make new product using new technologies. In addition, this shoe does not threaten players’ health.
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